Athorath

... If you are gonna complain about this then at least have the decency to have some actual critical thinking and some common sense to do so, not only have you somehow forgotten a very simple idea, the fact that not everything will be explained to you in the first chapter you also have the stupidity to say, that it's not the first chapter when the previous 'chapter' explains his system. Even then, wait a few chapters (6-7 or less depending on the amount of words in them) to say that it's not explained. Honestly, the more comments I read on here the more I'm starting to think people seem to be entitled as hell and lack any basic thought. If you think of replying to this btw, I'm just gonna ignore you.

Still like this btw, but I'm gonna assume people missed it because no one seems to get this far into it besides through skim reading due to the running sentences, the repeated beats, and overall it just seems created by AI. And the reason you couldn't see it is probably the same, the paragraphs just meld together and only through thoroughly reading it can you pick on this. I'm not saying this to be rude or anything, I'm just saying this because while I like the story, or at least it's premise, the things I mentioned previously are stopping me from enjoying it or reading it any further. If you do consider a rewrite of this I'll check it out since again, the premise is interesting, the execution needs some work though and more thought put into it though besides what is mostly AI from what I see. If it isn't AI I'm sorry for saying that, but from what I know and my own experience using it this how it usually writes stories.

... Holy mother of Christ, it's still going? AND THE CHAPTERS STILL AREN'T LOCKED BEHIND A WALL!? I'm gonna give this another read. And hope it still lives up even after two years, especially considering it's getting a rewrite. If it has fallen off during those two years, I wouldn't be surprised but I'm hoping that's not the case. Hopefully, I will get to the newer chapters quickly so I can start commenting again. I'll update my review over time, but I'm starting it with 5 stars.

There is a whole paragraph describing him literally ripping into pieces.

... The more I see you the more I think you are barely paying attention to the story.

Rias is def gonna freak out. And he is gonna TONS of coins from that especially if she loses control over her power of destruction, watching as her own power kills everyone... It would be glorious if I thought it will happen but I doubt it Wish to see more and I'll probably write a review in a bit, if I don't and pass out just comment or put a like on this so I remember.

It's fine if you use it and I don't think you do, just don't overdo it. It helps with inspiration and to better explain details, it shouldn't be used to completely rewrite it for you. At least that's how I see it.

The best money is always in the underground. And you just so happen to gain more skill... Either from going against a bunch of roid abusers to people bribing and 'pushing' someone to win through some unsavory means.

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