Thank you! <3

let me at him

geez, old guy needs to relax

💀✋️ they're not scared at all

🤔 Wouldn't that be lonely?

nah they're cotton candy. 🧍‍♀️

lesgeddiiittt

Not the Zebras 😱

🤔

Well, that was easy. ‎(⌐■_■)

I like this person more than the gatekeeper now <3

600 climbers and monsters? Dang.

I've got a mental image of him now and he looks so cool!

Hi Author! I like this book so far. The first chapter took me by surprise with how negative the MC is, but I get where they're coming and why they think that way. It's refreshing to find a character like this compared to the "typical strong-willed, can't be dragged down and is always tough no matter what MC". I know this is a sci-fi story but the synopsis has me feeling rather lost, it's not bad but it could be better. I noticed that there are some instances where the reader is told what is going on rather than showing. It's just a personal preference but I'd rather find out what is going on as it is happening rather than being told what happened, unless it's background info meant to be sprinkled throughout the story. As for the writing quality, the style is good. Nothing too difficult to understand and easy to catch on to. However, please use the free version of Grammarly to double-check for some errors you may have missed. It's your first book, not bad at all. The worldbuilding is okay as described but like the synopsis, it could be better. Overall, the story is good so far. Nothing too flimsy that could crumble at any moment and it has a direction, I'm keeping my fingers crossed for a character development arc because I adore those. Especially when the character would learn from it and it makes me want to cheer for them! Great job, Author. <3

Hi, Author! I found a link to this story from a form. It's interesting so far and I like the style you wrote this in, I don't mind the mix of past and present tense, I'm still trying to master that too. It's a nice way to start the story, allowing the readers to digest information as the world unfolds in front of their eyes. I know what I'm going to stay up reading now, yay! (◠﹏◠✿)