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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked2d
    Replied to Monarch_Lord

    Mc isn't a wannabe hero. He just does whatever the hell he wants. He will do some nice stuff, though.

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    Strongest In the Apocalypse
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
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    Replied to Monarch_Lord

    Yep. Dungeons spawned on quite a few people, but not all of them. Price was one of the unfortunate ones, or fortunate, depending on how you look at it.

    Over the span of a night, the world had turned to chaos. Half of the population of Earth had simply been wiped off the face of the planet, dead. And the number was rising.
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked3d
    Replied to Monarch_Lord

    It's never going premium :)

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    Strongest In the Apocalypse
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked6d
    Replied to Shadowlord96

    HAHAHA

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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
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    Commented

    go get that granny >:)

    "It's… It's… It's beautiful" Lachesis said in awe.
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    Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked2mth
    Replied to Roasted_Brenden

    Why would her daughter be in a commercial?

    There was a vast sky which showed several characters fighting against one another. One of them was a beautiful blonde-haired woman currently equipped in white armor and had feathered angelic-like wings. In this commercial, she battled against a blue-skinned and horned guy wearing a black cape. The two were blasting one another with magic-like effects…
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    Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked2mth
    Commented

    ...I think you need an editor.

    Perhaps I should ask Rita, my friend? She's coming today before lunch to ask for advice., At the moment, she's currently preoccupied with her little kid, so she always comes here to ask me for tips on how to raise her baby.
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    Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked2mth
    Replied to PancakesWitch

    Don't you have like... 10 other stories? And a patreon? Just how much do you make?

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    Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked5mth
    Commented

    Tftc

    Ch 32 Infinite Biomass!
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    Eternity: God Mechanic
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked5mth
    Replied to killed_by_a_devil

    YO

    Derek was ecstatic, and not only because this world had magic, but also because as soon as he heard the word Ekidu, he had felt something clicking inside of him.
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    Supreme Magus
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked5mth
    Replied to Daoisth4Otxa

    Thank you! I take whatever advice, whether good or bad! It would be helpful if you guys pointed out grammar mistakes and whatnot to help me out, thanks :D

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    Reborn as a Goblin - Road to Mastery
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked6mth
    Replied to Daoisth4Otxa

    System is not omnipotent, but Heaven is.

    Ch 1 I'm a Goblin?
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    Reborn as a Goblin - Road to Mastery
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked6mth
    Replied to NandoFalske

    Who designed your cover?

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    The Villain's Shopping System
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked6mth
    Replied to Romance_guy

    I'm trying. I have a full schedule, so I can't upload daily.

    Ch 15 Intermission (1/1)
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    Reborn as a Goblin - Road to Mastery
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked6mth
    Replied to Romance_guy

    Definitely

    Ch 14 Interrogation
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    Reborn as a Goblin - Road to Mastery
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked6mth
    Replied to Romance_guy

    Nope.

    Ch 14 Interrogation
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked6mth
    Replied to Javon_Nixon

    Thanks, fixed!

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    Reborn as a Goblin - Road to Mastery
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked6mth
    Replied to RiCrease

    You're experiencing writers block. It's alright. Just write something else or do something else and then come back to the story. You might be feeling refreshed.

    Ch 12 Trial of Sense(2)
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    King of the skies: I reincarnated as a bird?!
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  • TheOneWho_Asked
    TheOneWho_Asked6mth
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    This book is amazing! From chapter one we are thrown straight into the action of this compelling story! I will now review with the webnovel system. The writing quality is a B+ or A-Grade, putting this author miles ahead of the others on webnovel. A few nitpicks I would put here is to proofread your sentences and make sure they make sense. Like, for example, you would often end a sentence prematurely. Stability of Updates is amazing. Story Development is awesome as well, nothing I can see regarding plot holes. It's a very emotional story. Character design is interesting, and the world is intriguing enough to make you want to know about it more. PS: AI generated covers cannot be copyrighted as AI isn't human, so you can use the cover for commercial purposes.

    This book has been deleted.