To be honest after reading the story I'm very disappointed there was a lot of potential that went to waste what are you talking about?................................................................................. it's Drop

The beginning was interesting, but Penny( Humor is good if it's not nonsense (did sheogorad bite him there by chance?) "Cheese for everyone"))

interesting work, success and inspiration to the author, and readers more chapters) perhaps mc should attract giants to speed up the process of home improvement, and increase the population at the expense of free people)[img=recommend][img=update]

ms is not trying to change the canon, ms's actions are nonsense with pathos like a loser schoolboy who received a bit of strength, disappointment, after chapter 7 it is not interesting to read, and ms's actions are annoying

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Бред, логика отсутствует полностью, персонажи просто капируют канон, отсутствие развития. Мс безиниативный фоновый персонаж который даже не пытался как-то повлиять на ситуацию, плывет по течению не используя возможности, автор просто следует канону даже если это путо