evilestheart

this is an awesome fanfic. I like the writing quality and story development a lot. please don't drop it.

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this story is a masterpiece. I love it. everything about the story is awesome. this story gives exactly what it said it would give you. an awesome crazy villain. the writing quality , the story development , character design, and the world background are all F***ING awesome .

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it's a good concept but poorly executed. the MC is a little bit*h. he has unlimited power and thousands of years of time but is seriously weak. what did he do in all those years? laze around ? also why is he so easily flustered? did he get no action in those thousands of years. all in all this is a disapopointment.

make him till at least 6.3 please

why the f isn't he using the system to break through to 9 star

shut up dude. katana is the coolest sword in anime.

I think you meant to say either you die or I die