I see you stopped uploading for a while I hope you come back soon especially if you come pick back up this got ff

I liked this novel and it’s sad you abandoned it since it’s the best current dbz novel but not many people know about it i guess

Greaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat fanficcccccccccccccccc But you should start from chapter 40 since HJ stopped uploading from there

Ohh it just stopped getting updated for a bit so i thought it got dropped Anyways love the plot and the fact that the mc can lose and get hurt and that anything can happen it’s a breath of fresh air from the stories we have in millions but you can predict every arc cause it’s a copy and paste plot anyway keep up the great work

Not gonna lie you have good ideas and nice plotting and good standards but you never comit and just drop a novel very easily wich makes people unsure whether to read your novel whe it could stop updating anytime

Legendary novel to be honest but it stopped getting updated for some reason

Can’t lie i am starting to suspect you are holy joke cause you continued this in a way very similar to him if not a little better so please keep up the great work and continue the rest of holy jokers stories until you feel comfortable enough to make your own masterpiece any all love

I just started this and I’m loving it please don’t drop

I really liked this ff I hope we get more chapters soon Is sucks that we stopped getting updates especially when we finally got to the good part

This author can never commits to a novel

Are you even coming back or should i assume you’re dead

Shouldn’t green lantern have lost flight and fallento his death since he lost his ring

Thanks for the chappi

What happened to holly joker

One of the best ff i have ever read so please keep up the great work and don’t drop this masterpiece

It’s crazy how good the writing quality is for a fanfic. Usually these fanfics are so predictable but this is quite unique and a breath of fresh air and i can feel a plot brewing aswell. Anyways please don’t drop and keep up you have talent brother or sister

I didn’t like it much at the start cause of the confusing power system but eventually i grew to like it after taking brakes from it a couple times

And just like that i stole your meme

Hello i subbed for patrean and read the unreleased chapters and i’d like to give you a feedback that maybe you can use to improve the story and correct some mistakes. To be honest the interactions between characters is alright and good but there is a lot of unrealistic stuff that put me off like how he built a mansion underground while being idk like 7 and how he afforded it when his parents didn’t leave him much wealth sense you mentioned that pretty much all they left him is the shadow clone jutsu and the house as inheritance and then i feel like you made the mc just too op of the bat as in he has enough chakra to make enough shadow clones to turn into birds and cover the entire uchiha clan compound as they release flyers and not to forget that you made characters have very low IQ. Idk if you didn’t research Naruto enough or maybe you weren’t going for a proper and realistic type of ff but please pay attention and make something great that everyone can remember and if you need inspiration i recommend Naruto: Dream to Immortality fanfic

Thanks