But don’t try be too poetic and put in a lot of pov on one scenario because it’s pretty annoying

Keep up the great work you’re a legend

Although there are some grammar mistakes on the first 70 chaps but the story is very well fleshed out and the character feel real especially endev and shoto and one of the things that made me give this a chance was the start to be honest where the reincarnation wasn’t some ballshit rob or system that ruins immersion and makes no sense but was although mysterious but understandable that there is a possibility of failure at reincarnating

Hello author Can you please fix up the grammar

Not gonna lie bruh the third person perspective and the constant poetic description style every 2 seconds is fuuuuuuuucking annoying, not only is it unnecessary but also that fact that i have to hear a scenario description from three sides every time gets me the urge to wanna quit

I can’t lie there are very few novels that kept my interest as much as this after reverend insanity so please keep up the great work and don’t drop because this feels like an original work rather then a ff

I can’t lie it was a bit bad on grammar at the start but then got a lot better but i’m glad that i found this since i was desperate for any good villain mc novel

He’s mostly a villain from what i have read He doesn’t mind killing children if it means saving his life

You should tag the ff properly and put a decent cover on if you want people to find it brother

This is on the top ten so are you gonna update it or should I not bother reading since you’re not updating it

Sigh a cliffhanger…

Hello author I don’t know if i should read this and waste time if you’re not gonna update it

I see you stopped uploading for a while I hope you come back soon especially if you come pick back up this got ff

I liked this novel and it’s sad you abandoned it since it’s the best current dbz novel but not many people know about it i guess

Greaaaaaasaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat fanficcccccccccccccccc But you should start from chapter 40 since HJ stopped uploading from there

Ohh it just stopped getting updated for a bit so i thought it got dropped Anyways love the plot and the fact that the mc can lose and get hurt and that anything can happen it’s a breath of fresh air from the stories we have in millions but you can predict every arc cause it’s a copy and paste plot anyway keep up the great work

Not gonna lie you have good ideas and nice plotting and good standards but you never comit and just drop a novel very easily wich makes people unsure whether to read your novel whe it could stop updating anytime

Legendary novel to be honest but it stopped getting updated for some reason

Can’t lie i am starting to suspect you are holy joke cause you continued this in a way very similar to him if not a little better so please keep up the great work and continue the rest of holy jokers stories until you feel comfortable enough to make your own masterpiece any all love