By the way, an interesting fact: contact lenses were once made of glass. And they were very uncomfortable to wear.

What does Gwen look like?

хаха, привет~

What?

Maybe give the characters normal names? You write in English, so the readers are people who speak English. What kind of names? In America they are generally impossible to perceive. Leave Chinese names in China

Who is Francesca? Photo for me

You killed the Harry Potter story. Half the films were dramas about the boy who lived. He was the only one who survived the night of Voldemort's attack. Now that his parents were alive, that night did not exist. He didn't become a Horcrux. Now there is no drama with Harry's fate, no drama with Snag. Now it's JUST Harry Potter. "A boy who is a boy"

What does Daphne look like?

Why is Dumbledore his grandfather? Dumbledore is just his grandmother's brother, nothing more. Stupid logic

Why did you do that?

Who do you imagine when you write about Lily? It's very interesting how the characters look.

hahahaha. you want too much.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Lydia

What?

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AND? All? This is the end? You didn't last long. Woe writer

I should have said no

Why so abruptly? Nothing foreshadowed such thoughts in the head of the protagonist. What the heck?

Summoning monsters is too boring and banal. When you kill a monster, it evaporates, leaving a magic stone. You don't need to cut anything, someone doesn't watch anime?