I don't know if it is just me, but there are no spaces between your periods and the first letter of the next sentence. Everything seems to blur together because of it.
I swear to God, I can't stop calling the MC Yun Yun. I know it's Yan Yun, but I can't help saying and spelling Yun Yun in my head 😂 I think I'm gonna give up now, he's Yun Yun now