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can safely say it got potential, just pick up update speed

how she got to 37 when she was below max level at the start?

A MASTERPIECE so far!!! Got a lot of potential

high time you restart this, it’s been a while now

I really enjoy this novel. The tension and pacing have been great, and it’s the kind of story that keeps me hooked. But lately the writing feels off, almost like it’s being auto-generated. Some arcs feel forced and drift away from the original storyline. Julian especially feels inconsistent, almost like he suddenly developed ADHD. What really bugged me was how dumb he’s been acting. Eleanor already told him that the prince is the King of Apollo, but when the Marquis mentioned it later, Julian reacted like he was hearing it for the first time. Stuff like that takes me out of the story. I think it would help a lot if you mapped out a clear storyboard of everything that’s supposed to happen, so the plot stays consistent without getting sidetracked. The novel has huge potential, and I’d love to see it hold onto that

Loving the potential here, but if the update pace doesn’t pick up, it’s gonna lose steam fast, don’t let a good thing fade.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

where can we find the discord?