It is really good nove, but i feel like it is missing “something” it feels rushed trough out the story. Like too little interactions. But otherwise i appreciate the effort you put in. [img=update]
Its good but shit. I feel like auhtor has some mental problems. Why do you ruin story with some random shit where he is struggling in those dreams and is basically facing lunatic self. It ruined whole story for me. Too dark. Otherwise it would be one of the best novels i have read.
At start i felt this was really good but why did you cipy it from Supernatural afterwards? Its literally going episode by episode with your story characters added as bonus...
Awesome story. Its interesting and is super fun and intereating, but sadly WHY THE FUCK DO YOU NEED TO BURN THE MC? The story after 250+ or smth ia just going down the drain... It was good read until then tho.