Nick_7865

Perfection, that’s the only way i can describe this!

Tbh, those who have visited China would know that they actually have everything that you want to eat and more. Not saying other places are bad but even as a Europian i prefer a lot of Chinese dishes. (Except too much freaking rice on everything)

Damn, thank you for explaining, that actually makes sense now!

This story FOR ME is really good, out of everything i dont yet understand MC weird angry moments but otherwise the story is good, it might not be the best i have read but its definitely not an “ AI slop “. There’s is plot, there are emotions and the story is fast paced. P.S. The MC ability is not completely understandable for now, especially the last few chapters (mid 70s) not sure if the author is planning to explain it more or there is plot for it but yeah, you have been warned.

Story is weird. It is decent but the start is weird, and for me you need to kinda skip trough some of the (i have no idea what do you call all that blood donating stuff). The story is just in its beginning so will see where it does go. Oh and for the love of anything, either take out the dont read chapter or just dont post it? You are doing good enough job, that you shouldn’t do shi* like this.

Didn’t she die? Wtf?

This is awesome

Where’s the picture?

It is good. For a fanfic a solid 7/10 i think. Some of the things i like and some i dont, but overall the story is good. 👍🏻 (review made for chapters until 60s)

yeah i am sorry but i dont Like this Freya bs. Way too out of contex for how the story is going. It was normal but why make her so overly obsessed? She shouldn’t be able tohave so much control over things? Sadly i am not author and cannot write where mc just says “f you freya, i dont care what you do, you cannot do shi*t to me without your divinity” or smth. Like i get she can use her familiy but not that blatant where every other god wouldn’t do shi” about it. Anyway, yeah waiting for for things to get better for Mc