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I think have improved try 'the maniac system'

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Hmmmmmmmmm, This story is really well written I love the way the characters are and the way the plot is I find this really intriguing love story.

Wow, Amazing work from the author this has well written characters and a good plot with well written storyline this is a good work keep it up.

Nice and well written premises for the novel and good characters the first chapter already provided heat and it has good plot keep it up author

Tis is a good fantasy novel I love the synopsis it is really has a good plot and interesting storyline really intriguing this is good author keep it up.

This is a nice plot and unique storyline based on a really good premises with an interesting story line good job author and can't wait for future chapters.

This is a interesting novel with a good plot and intriguing storyline and good characters I like the premises of the novel good work from the author.

This is a nice I'vel and its has some issues but the author has done a good job and well written characters with a good plot.good job keep it up author.