CryingSilence
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First, is writing quality, which, although there are a few grammar errors here and there, mostly extra commas or no commas where a comma is needed, the writing quality is a lot better than most books on the platform, so a solid 4. Second is the stability of updates, which, although is pretty good at the moment, it's too early to tell, so another 4. Third is the story development, which is pretty good, as the beginning is fast paced, as it needs to be, with only like two chaps of info dump, which is pretty good. Fourth is character design, which is pretty generic honestly. I mean, sure, MC is cultivator -> regular dude -> sci-fi mage, with a wanting for power, but like, I've seen the first two steps before, and the third step has been explored in a few novels, so it's not like there's anything that ground-breakingly new, neither are the characters super realistic or get you super emotional, so another 4. Finally, there's the world background, which is the best aspect of this novel, as it's a pretty novel sci-fi world, and, seeing as there aren't that many sci-fi novels on this platform, I've already seen some pretty unique things, and the world building overall is amazing. First and only 5. That's all, a pretty good read overall, and one that I would probably just wait until it stockpiled a bunch just to read it all in one go. Keep it up, author!
No, there was a three year timeskip.
It definitely isn't
I mean, gimme some leeway man. I usually don't end my chaps on a cliffhanger, only like, 25% of them end in a cliffhanger, which is abysmally low compared to a lot of other authors, because I hate it when authors do it to me too, so, I think you can have the patience for a cliffhanger or two every once in a while, or have I spoiled you too much?... (Also, there will be a extra chap when a reach 10k cols -_-)
Just cause I'm trying to make it an AU
Nice