CryingSilence
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CryingSilence2 years agoPostedFirst, is writing quality, which, although there are a few grammar errors here and there, mostly extra commas or no commas where a comma is needed, the writing quality is a lot better than most books on the platform, so a solid 4. Second is the stability of updates, which, although is pretty good at the moment, it's too early to tell, so another 4. Third is the story development, which is pretty good, as the beginning is fast paced, as it needs to be, with only like two chaps of info dump, which is pretty good. Fourth is character design, which is pretty generic honestly. I mean, sure, MC is cultivator -> regular dude -> sci-fi mage, with a wanting for power, but like, I've seen the first two steps before, and the third step has been explored in a few novels, so it's not like there's anything that ground-breakingly new, neither are the characters super realistic or get you super emotional, so another 4. Finally, there's the world background, which is the best aspect of this novel, as it's a pretty novel sci-fi world, and, seeing as there aren't that many sci-fi novels on this platform, I've already seen some pretty unique things, and the world building overall is amazing. First and only 5. That's all, a pretty good read overall, and one that I would probably just wait until it stockpiled a bunch just to read it all in one go. Keep it up, author!
- CryingSilence2 years agoReplied to Justa_NormalGuy
No, there was a three year timeskip.
- CryingSilence2 years agoReplied to CHVA2001
Thank you so much for the kind review!
- CryingSilence2 years agoReplied to Purple_g00s3
It definitely isn't
- CryingSilence2 years agoReplied to Unmasked63
Thank you for the kind review!
- CryingSilence2 years agoReplied to Samir_Khan_1723
Well, I've been writing by myself for the past two months, so yeah, don't think I'll be dropping anything anytime toon :)
- CryingSilence2 years agoReplied to Chibi_Zuobai
Also, just realized you were on day 24, so...
- CryingSilence2 years agoReplied to Samir_Khan_1723
Oh, I said this before, but my sister quit I while back, it's only me now, sadly...
- CryingSilence2 years agoReplied to Chibi_Zuobai
Uhm...
- CryingSilence2 years agoPosted
This is the author's shameless review! If you guys find any mistakes, just comment on them and I'll fix it in a day. Thanks for reading! Also, if you guys have any questions, just reply to this post and I'll answer them as early as possible, I just won't reveal any spoilers.
