PrimDragonGod

Rhongomyniad a créé un Camelot high-tech. Alors, pourquoi ne pas construire un port spatial relié directement au château, avec des vaisseaux spatiaux amarrés au quai ?

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Since this story doesn’t feature a reincarnated character, I initially thought it would explore a confrontation between Loki from the multiverse and Loki from the MCU, with spectators participating in Q&A sessions and receiving rewards to grow stronger. However, instead of that, the story introduces a brand-new, overpowered Loki who ends up making all the other characters seem insignificant. While the power level has increased, the Avengers have become incredibly weak. The supposed comparison between the two Lokis has turned into a story focused solely on a single Loki, which is likely to disappoint those who were expecting a real confrontation between the two versions of the character. In short, if you're a big Loki fan, this fanfiction is for you. But if you came to see how characters react to two Lokis or for a true comparison between them, you’ll probably be disappointed. If Loki isn’t your favorite Marvel Universe character, you might want to skip this one. At some point, you might even wish for Deadpool to pop up and tell Loki that his story is causing problems and that readers were expecting a real comparison between the two. At least that would have triggered a reaction from the characters watching the projection screen in the novel and made them wonder how Deadpool even knows about it.

I found the first chapters of the novel captivating and promising, but unfortunately, the last chapter published, chapter 9, bored me. It killed my desire to continue reading. In the end, the fact that the author stopped writing lessens the loss I would have felt if I had enjoyed that final chapter.

I give 5 narrows to motivate the author. The story is good.👍 .

I love this story at first I thought the main character's lack of interaction with the new humanity was going to make the story really bad but this story was really good, and especially I love the ending but I would have liked to see them explore other universes or even explore an existing cinematic universe like Marvel or DC it would be really cool.

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Author) as Artoria builds a church, she could use avalon as her divine domain.

Seriously, at first I loved this story. But the more this story progresses, the more it really becomes a mess. We don't really see the primordial vampire we expected when we started reading the story. And then she accepts that her servants do anything to her, give her poison, forcibly puts her to sleep more than once.