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Itz_JayJ

Itz_JayJ

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No paper no pencil but I'm still drawing attention-tough vibes

2022-08-05 JoinedGlobal
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  • Itz_JayJ
    Itz_JayJ6mth
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    It's good and immersive but the first half of Chp 1 was hard to read. What I mean is I personally find it dumb when a situation is overly exaggerated. I mean how did Valeria not receive backlash for openly admitting she's basically dumb and used someone to pass school. But it is, what it is.

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  • Itz_JayJ
    Itz_JayJ6mth
    Posted

    It's pretty good. Usually system novels are cringe to me but this isn't. I'll probably keep this as a go to read.

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  • Itz_JayJ
    Itz_JayJ6mth
    Commented

    All that for 1 exp point smh.

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  • Itz_JayJ
    Itz_JayJ6mth
    Commented

    He don't want her aint nothing gay about that😮‍💨.

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  • Itz_JayJ
    Itz_JayJ6mth
    Commented

    Please no 😭

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  • Itz_JayJ
    Itz_JayJ6mth
    Posted

    It's pretty good I ain't gonna lie. I can't say that I will read it whenever I can, but it will be one of my top 5 choices when I want to read something. 👍

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  • Itz_JayJ
    Itz_JayJ6mth
    Commented

    What about his girlfriend? Either Aoroi is still naive or his betrayal and heartbreak wasn't that bad.

    He locked eyes with a pretty girl in the front row who batted her eyelashes and offered a flirtatious smile. Blood rushed to Aoroi's cheeks. He wasn't used to such attention, especially from someone so attractive.
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  • Itz_JayJ
    Itz_JayJ6mth
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    While this is an interesting turn of events, I do think Aoroi should've added a condition. It's like he completely forgot his whole reason for revenge. So I think it would've added to the revenge idea if he said something like " I'll choose the second option but help me get revenge on someone" or similar in that idea.

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  • Itz_JayJ
    Itz_JayJ6mth
    Posted

    I didn't give you a 5/5 because in the words of one of my English teachers, "Nothing is perfect". This does not detract from my positive thoughts about the writing. I believe the describing and flow is impeccable. Personally, I like novels that I can picture myself as the narrator or protagonist. Yet, it's novels like this that just have good writing that doesn't deter me away from reading. In conclusion I like it and that matters.

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