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Everything quite good keep going ............................................................................................................................

I drop this shit ı get tired of half chapters

This is just my personal opinion, but the last 3 chapters felt a little slow to me. Since it’s already 17 chapters in, I was hoping for a bit more story progression. I usually like finishing a chapter feeling curious and excited for the next one, but I didn’t quite get that feeling from these recent chapters. Of course, I’m not a writer or a professional reader, so this is only my perspective. Maybe adding some other anime characters could make things feel more dynamic. For some reason, I just haven’t really connected with the OC characters yet.

What the hell It's too short like 5 ch equals 1

This woman is oc character or what?

Not for me.specifically ı don't like the mc and it feels beri chinese ............. ........................................... ..............

It's good brother keep going ı hope he meet with thop or this novel has a romance? xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

It has long descriptions, which is a bit tedious. You could have written 5 episodes instead of 8, considering the content is short it could have been written as 4 episodes instead of 8, considering the richness of the content ıt feels unnecessarily long, but that's just my opinion. Continue however you feel comfortable. I give it 4.6/5. Keep going!

Chapters too short buddy It's like not like read 6 ch but 2-3 ch

Wtf why are they working ın novel endustry harunos family have a company and hiratsuka is a teacher