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Rion34

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  • Rion34
    Rion3413d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 31 Arrival of the black snakes II
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    Level up: SSS Class Hunter
    Fantasy · Chaos_to_all
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  • Rion34
    Rion347mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Babetos, The god of Trinity
    altalt
    Reincarnated with my wives to Conquer the world.
    Fantasy · Timmru
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  • Rion34
    Rion347mth
    Replied to ritzV

    True, haven't seen the bitch

    "Why are you dressing in my room?" Ethan asked, his voice calm but firm as he walked into the room, closing the door behind him. He took a few steps towards the bed and sat down, looking directly at Gabi who was still standing in front of the changing boarp.
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    The Book of Lilivil: All my wives are witches
    Fantasy · Kirito_K5
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  • Rion34
    Rion347mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

    Ch 1 A boy, Coffee and Rain.
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    The Book of Lilivil: All my wives are witches
    Fantasy · Kirito_K5
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  • Rion34
    Rion347mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

    Ch 1 What world do you want?
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    The Village of Depravity
    Fantasy · Timmru
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  • Rion34
    Rion348mth
    Replied to PeterPan

    Wth

    Ch 2 Chapter 4. Surviving as a scavenger..2
    altalt
    Assassin system: Rise of a nobody
    Eastern · B_DRAG
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  • Rion34
    Rion349mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

    Ch 1 A boy, Coffee and Rain.
    altalt
    The Book of Lilivil: All my wives are witches
    Fantasy · Kirito_K5
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  • Rion34
    Rion349mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

    Ch 1 A boy, Coffee and Rain.
    altalt
    The Book of Lilivil: All my wives are witches
    Fantasy · Kirito_K5
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  • Rion34
    Rion3410mth
    Posted

    5 chaps in and I can say it's quite good, the writing, but you should really work on your telling rather than showing.

    altalt
    Assassin system: Rise of a nobody
    Eastern · B_DRAG
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  • Rion34
    Rion3410mth
    Commented

    Now this is somewhat snow and not tell

    Ch 2 Chapter 4. Surviving as a scavenger..2
    altalt
    Assassin system: Rise of a nobody
    Eastern · B_DRAG
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  • Rion34
    Rion3410mth
    Commented

    Now we talking

    One of the males called out to the female in front, "Wu Lina, run faster! The ghost is gaining on us!" His tone was one of concern and vigilance.
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    Assassin system: Rise of a nobody
    Eastern · B_DRAG
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  • Rion34
    Rion3410mth
    Commented

    3rd person now,nice

    Despite his weary appearance, one could discern a fierce determination burning in his eyes, a testament to his unyielding will to survive.
    altalt
    Assassin system: Rise of a nobody
    Eastern · B_DRAG
    detail
  • Rion34
    Rion3410mth
    Commented

    Tbh, you really gotta do more show not tell.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2. Beginning of the disaster
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    Assassin system: Rise of a nobody
    Eastern · B_DRAG
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  • Rion34
    Rion3410mth
    Commented

    This is too fast paced

    Ch 2 Chapter 1. Introduction.
    altalt
    Assassin system: Rise of a nobody
    Eastern · B_DRAG
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  • Rion34
    Rion3410mth
    Commented

    What harm could they do?!

    I hesitated for a moment, wondering if I should take them or not. But then I thought, what harm could they do? So, I swallowed the pills.
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    Assassin system: Rise of a nobody
    Eastern · B_DRAG
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  • Rion34
    Rion3410mth
    Commented

    Expected.

    However, a few weeks later, the result of the quiz came out, and to my great disappointment, I didn't pass.
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    Assassin system: Rise of a nobody
    Eastern · B_DRAG
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  • Rion34
    Rion3411mth
    Commented
    Su Bingxin had long heard the movements of these brats. Just as she opened the door to welcome them in, she heard the congratulatory words of this little brat. Instantly, her ears turned red. Su Bingxin swore that today was definitely the day that she had blushed the most in the past 20 years.
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    On The Path Of Cultivation To Become God
    Fantasy · Lord_Olethros
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  • Rion34
    Rion3411mth
    Commented
    Aiko's eyes widened in both anger and urgency as her attention shifted to Quin. His remark, tinged with an unsettling tone, triggered a surge of fury within her, compelling her to take immediate action.
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    The Book of Lilivil: All my wives are witches
    Fantasy · Kirito_K5
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  • Rion34
    Rion3411mth
    Commented

    This guy is getting annoying

    "Why aren't you departing with the rest?" Quin's voice resonated through the air, drawing Aiko and Bali's attention. He approached them with deliberate steps, his presence a mixture of curiosity and intrigue.
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    The Book of Lilivil: All my wives are witches
    Fantasy · Kirito_K5
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  • Rion34
    Rion3411mth
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    With a sudden surge of energy, Bali extended his arm, presenting his spear to Sandra. The air around him crackled with a fiery aura, a reflection of the turmoil within his soul. "Return to your sisters, Sandra. I make sure to kill every last one of these assassins here".
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    The Book of Lilivil: All my wives are witches
    Fantasy · Kirito_K5
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