Writing quality 5/10, I kinda understand since you're still an immature writer, so I'll give this a pass. Update stability 3/10, Consistent but slow... 1 chapter a day isn't enough, personally. Story development 5/10, kinda rushed but still in an ok range. Character design 10/10, described perfectly perhaps a little too much showing instead of telling, but it doesn't bothers me. World building is amazingly done 100/10, creative.. that's all I'm gonna add.