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I'm thinking of giving Itadori a love interest in this story. Who would be the ideal girl?- _Majid_1233mthCommentedThe second is the memory evoked by Naruto, which makes Tsunade want to fulfill the unfinished dream of Kawaki and Dan.
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so Sasuke and Naruto are weaker than their canon counterparts? in the anime one of naruto's clones defeated the third raikage
"Don't be so impulsive in the future. You two have not yet fully adapted to your new abilities yet, so you still have to train it more. Just leave the rest to me." - _Majid_1233mthCommented
Multi shadiw clone
But he believes that among these people, none of them could successfully learn the Shadow Clone Technique after seeing it once. - _Majid_1234mthCommentedMegumi, who at this point completely understood the situation they were in, swallowed dryly as she positioned herself, he teeth clenching as he signaled with his hands.
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Is that also why it felt like Rio lost control of himself when he was trying to kill demon prince Alverto? đ¤
'It even lost its form just to get its master injuredâŚ. Long story short, it can only be used when your emotions are calm and have no lingering killing intent or any other negative emotions in themâŚ.' (Rio) - _Majid_1235mthCommentedHe just wanted to live an ordinary life.
- _Majid_1239mthCommented"Oh, so you're like a smartphone charger? Only functional with an original plug? Then how about I stick this 'original' plug into your fucking assâ!"
- _Majid_1239mthCommented
He is married and has a child...
"If not take it to your friend Robin-san" Said Ain in a low tone. - _Majid_12310mthCommented" Madara! Madara!!" Another boy run to his position as he called out his name with enthusiasm and joy.
- _Majid_12310mthCommented"Man, if Bryson really is just a villain for the sake of being one, then doesn't that make the story so... lame?"
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- _Majid_1231yrCommented
yes, please continue
Should I continue this? - _Majid_1231yrCommented"Wait hold on, who are those people on the other side of the portal? They kinda look like usâŚexceptâŚthere's a guy there in the guild I've never seen at all. Is that really our guild in that portal?" Gray asked as he got a better look. Looking right at him was a young man with blond, spiky hair, blue eyes, and three whisker markings on his cheeks.
- _Majid_1231yrCommented
at least he didn't see cid's Excalibur
Watching in horror as his older brother barked like a dog with Alexia patting his head and muttering "Good boy, Pochi.", Anos almost spat out blood, bones, spine, and his entire organs from his mouth as he once again SERIOUSLY considered if his human brother is suffering from some kind of severe causality-law defying mental illness that is undetectable by magic - _Majid_1231yrCommentedCh 13 Chapter 13 - Stress Relief
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Made me think of this sceneđ
"Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south! Hado 31: Shakkaho!" Itachi says as a giant red orb of reiatsu is shot towards the target. As it hits the target, it explodes and Itachi takes a knee to the ground in fatigue. 'I put too much reiatsu into that while also trying to maintain reiatsu flow to my weights. I should deactivate the weights while I learn new kido.' Itachi thinks to himself. - _Majid_1231yrPosted
(Read up to CH 73) I really enjoyed this story so far, the MC is calm, calculative and isn't afraid to change the plot if it benefits him. one thing for me personally is Fade (the original MC) who initially was supposed to save the world, right now he is just a clown while Rio is the one who has to solve the events because of the butterfly effect he created, I'd like to see more from Fade rather than just being there for comedic relief, like seeing him going through a redemption arc, though for now I don't really see him having any redeeming qualities compared to Link and some other characters (of course this is just my personal opinion). Overall I enjoyed it, I also liked the fact that you've added the antagonists side of the story and that you're also focusing on the side characters, I am also curious about the guilds, other nations, races and the alliance that have been mentioned as well as the Divine spirits, if there are more apart from the lion as well as where they come from etc. etc. anyway keep it up.
- _Majid_1231yrCommented
I'd also like to see him reflecting on what he s done and have some charachter development later on,
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