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Is the author a fan of lotm.
The small percentage one's ? right?
Well how to start the grammar is awesome the words used are used for that context are just perfect and the direction of the story is the same the interaction between the characters doesn't seem forced just natural really good 👍.
Was he father or grandfather???
first chapter was too short and well story is alright and trying something new but not out of the line so over all cool
yay like many I gave five stars to my novel 😉