There's no way it's like that, it would be complete disgust, not only Danzo completely disgusting in his design but it would be a total insult to the original Naruto to mix him with someone so pathetic.

Veo un solo problema en toda la historia... olvidas a los personajes y mundos que aun no ha visitado, te estas concentrando tanto en añadir y añadir que dejas de lado lo inconcluso, es decir se que cada mundo tendrá su trama, pero creo que era mejor resolver lo que ya teníamos. Bueno que se yo, quizás lo pienso demasiado pero hay tantos conceptos añadidos a la historia que se ha vuelto bastante confusa, no compleja, confusa.

Akeno de Highschool DxD

That's where you're wrong, Quirrel is not even remotely a powerful wizard, one of the reasons why he joined Voldemort was because of his desire for power and disgust at his weakness, Voldy himself spoke badly of him saying how pathetic he was. On the other hand, Voldemort had no choice but to join him, he was in a precarious situation.

I'll be honest, I started crying with Pandora's death, I don't know why... excellent fanfic so far, it's the best HP fanfic I've ever read For some strange reason there aren't many good ones with an OG lol everyone else is mostly Harry or Draco.

The only thing I don't support is his perspective on living and dying as a human. I mean... it's f*king Gilgamesh. He should covet his future more, travel to other worlds and see more of it through the millennia.

Noooo Chad was a sweetheart, too kind and he likes animals! haaah... I guess this AU wasn't for him, RIP.

It's pretty good and entertaining, however, the frequency of updates leaves a lot to be desired... It would be great to improve that, point aside, the lemons are good but it would be great to see more expressions in the characters, also... football has been left aside, that is very negative.

The beginning was... pretty bad. I mean, he is a normal teenager until that moment (in terms of his life and personality) suddenly lightning strikes, he decides to brandish it and throw it at two apparent gods saying 'get out of my city!'... dude, that was cringe , unreal and disappointing, All that in maybe what? 500 words? bruh .

Pretty good, however the age progression is ridiculously slow. It would only improve that. It is quite brilliant that the MC has a kuudere attitude, I had not seen it in other novels.

Honestly, my only prejudice so far is Alex's attitude, he's too unfriendly, I don't see a way to build any kind of romance, friendship or at least for him to progress in his life having that attitude 24/7.

Very good story, however I have only one problem... WHY DID YOU SKIP ALL THE LEMONS THE FIRST TIMES OF ALL OF THEM?! LMAO I think the problem with lemon is that it's inconsistent and comes when no one expects it lol leaving that, good job.

Pretty good everything, with the exception of character design. I literally think we don't even know the MC's hair color. I think we would empathize more if we knew more details about them and in this way let our imagination fly more.

Yeah, definitely not a fan of this. I mean, now pretty much anyone can awaken dragons that way (using flames what else did you talk about ), whether they use some of it doesn't matter too much since dragons still present a threat and in the big picture there are more dragons that do not belong to them, they are even from the so-called enemy, they stopped having a monopoly, which could present future problems, which is what the mc was specifically trying to avoid with his marriages. The only solution I see to this is for both Blackfyres to marry the MC which I don't know how you are going to achieve given their factions and personalities, I find it difficult to grow a real love between them and avoid problems with their future children, etc.

The story is great... but I don't know what a good idea it is to give dragons to the girl from the north and the Blackfyre, aren't they too op with their abilities? That is to say, one that apparently sees the future even more clearly than seeing it in fire and the other that is almost omnipresent, being able to see everything that happens in the world and what happened in the past. This leaves Eragon far below the others, he only has 7 dragons, of which he is only a rider of one.

What are you saying? From the visions we know that there are 3. Only Varys always mentions his nephew (from what he described, I already want them to kill him)

I think I got lost here... Varys's nephew?

In GOT, like many stories set in medieval times, status is everything. Therefore, the nobles married to strengthen their political position and alliance. In the case of GOT before the beginning of the canon, the story always worked like this, even with Eddard, Roberth, Arryn and all the political leaders, not to mention the Targaryens or other Valyrian families.

I think only two stories have made me cry, The beginning after the end and this one. It was excellent, 10/10. I used to like or not bother pokemon harem... but this story has made me appreciate that truly cared for characters are spectacular. Each one of the fmc contributes and leaves an important mark in the minds of the readers. It is the first time that immortality does not leave me indifferent and it is in fact important, you can feel the passing of the years and the growth. The MC may be all powerful, but not omnipotent and you truly understand the price for the true love. It is the first harem novel with a true romance that you feel in all the chapters, I can only applaud the author.

Mmm... creo que hablar de múltiples líneas del tiempo y otros Yukis con destinos distintos a este esta mal siendo que el es un campeón, no deberia ser su existencia única en ese aspecto? Ya saben, por los privilegios y el control de estos una vez que todo su potencial sea desbloqueado.