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I thought he used a single ball to make a new arm so I had to read your comment twice to understand itđ. Also, thank you for this mass release. I cant imagine how frustrating it would have been reading all those cliff hangers till we finally got to the end. And congrats on reaching rank 1
Anyway, while I have you here. Let me take the chance to tell how amazingly well you've done the relationships between characters. Mainly Kenshin and Guizhong (not their relationship with each other. Their relationships with other characters). Everything is clear and well done. Nothing is forced and we can easily tell where they stand with other characters. I especially like his relationship with Jean and Shenhe (I'm super excited to see more development with Shenhe). And the comedy as well, everything is really funny. In my opinion I think you did best with the baby chapters. I was crying tears of laughter in those chapters. Keep up the good work and keep pumping whatever fairy magic dust(gold cocaine or cocaine for platinum membersđ) you're pumping in this story. It is a work of art and I hope you make it to the top 3 on the power stone rankings
I think he mentioned a personality change and extra powers. While he's there he'd get new powers and would have to act differently to survive or something (not sure if I'm remembering this right). Then when he comes back he'd keep some of the new powers and lose the rest. Dont know if he'd still have a different personality or not
Once again I left it for a while to let the chapters stack. Was surprised to see that you hadn't uploaded for a month but your explanation made sense so I wasnt upset. As always, the chapters were amazing. Great work with Tokoyami. The guy is pretty OP now. The Deku fights were pretty cool. Excited for what comes next. Keep up the good work
All genshin impact fanfictions I've read were too boring for me to continue. This one though, I was crying tears of laughter in the baby chapters. The chapters after that were also pretty funny. Kenshin is an amazingly well made character and his relationships with the others is also explained pretty well. Story is amazing. Unique power. No fighting actually makes it more interesting than a lot of fanfics in a way. Most of the other fanfics I've seen that have no fighting (in a world where fighting is constant) are super boring. This along with one other fanfic are the only exceptions to the ones I've seen. Definitely a hidden gem. Keep up the good work and I hope you can keep the update schedule mostly the same. That's another great factor of your story.