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This story is a lot better than the original which had a good idea but was rushed. I'm wondering though, is the world in this version the same as the other one? Cause the synopsis mentioned dread beasts yet nothing about them or the evolution system of the original have been mentioned. They were awesome ideas that would be amazing if done right. Are they gonna come back later or they're just gone? If they're not part of this world then update the synopsis.
So far, I'm liking it.
Great. I'll be waiting. Hopefully the chapters aren't short.
Story is going great. I'm appreciating all the differences from canon and the interactions between every character. Especially how everyone is much stronger than their canon selves. I find it funny to picture them meeting their canon selves and comparing the differences. You could make that as a side story chapter if you want. Either way, keep up the great work.
Adaptation, but only if it can be improved during the story. Dreamscape wouldn't work since most of the enemy gems are soldiers. Future sight wouldn't work cause he's human, can't keep up with a gem. Don't want the stand because I don't like jojo.
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This story is among the better bnha fanfics I've read. It's getting darker but I'm fine with it for now. Just hope it becomes a harem. Anyway, keep doing what you're doing. It's interesting. What's the upload schedule btw?
The past users have more experience than deku, they could advise him. Also, because of his strength, system and future knowledge he has the ability to change the endings of different characters. That's why they're pushing him not to resort to killing. If he was the same strength as anime deku then that'd probably be the only option but this isn't the case. For shigaraki, he could just use overhaul's quirk erasing bullet after dealing with AFO, no need to die. He could do the same for any villain unwilling to change. There's also been no inconsistency I think, I'm not fully sure. As long as the MC takes a minute to calm down and think then everything will go smoother. Story is getting darker but for now that's fine. Depends on how dark it will get
I say do both Erza and Mira. Though if you do that also show more of Erza and Ryuu's bond in future chapters so that it makes as much sense as him and Mira.
Yeah, Without a valid reason, would be pure bullshit if he doesn't recognize it quickly.