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TheKray

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2022-08-03 JoinedUnited States
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  • TheKray
    TheKray1yr
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    Drumroll please!

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  • TheKray
    TheKray1yr
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    Intriguing enough.

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  • TheKray
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    Order. Yes I can read.

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  • TheKray
    TheKray1yr
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    Haha🤣 okay👌.

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  • TheKray
    TheKray1yr
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    Okay I'm currently at chapter 5 so maybe this review will not do the book much justice. However, writing quality is good. The author uses simple and easy to understand vocabulary. So five stars. The story itself seems interesting enough but once again I'm at chapter 5 but so far so good. The characters are okay. At least they don't seem like fillers or extras yet. A chapter a day is good but for binge readers like me I feel author should increase number of chapters per day. I think novel will get much stronger following then. World background- I'm at chapter five so... Overall, thumbs up author. Keep up the good work.

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  • TheKray
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    As far as prologues go, this was quite good. Just hope the story keeps it up.

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  • TheKray
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    I'm sold.

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  • TheKray
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    Blood rivers hmmm. I feel like authors do not have to necessarily perpetuate this stereotype.

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  • TheKray
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    Okayyyy.

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  • TheKray
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    I like, now off you go to my infamous dungeon library.

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  • TheKray
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    I'm guessing he is the father🤔But that's just me. I'm sharper than most.

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  • TheKray
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    👀OK.

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  • TheKray
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    Oh the poor soul.

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  • TheKray
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    Not sure what a law is but me hungry.

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  • TheKray
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    Okay, mc is coockoo crazy. Me likey.

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  • TheKray
    TheKray1yr
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    Okaayy👀.

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  • TheKray
    TheKray1yr
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    Not bad for at all for a first chapter. A little bummed out that we don't even know the name of the mc yet.

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  • TheKray
    TheKray1yr
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    Well done and dusted, first chapter in the bag y'all! I'm still figuring out a few things but we are up and away. Get on board the Hade train. TheKray out.

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  • TheKray
    TheKray1yr
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    I appreciate it my friend. Will try not to disappoint.

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  • TheKray
    TheKray1yr
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    Good plot overally. The fact that MC is originally a normal dude is refreshing. Lot's of us are normal dudes out here. The writing errors must be reduced though. Wish author the best.

    IF YOU WANT TO SURVIVE, HAVE SEX.
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