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I think we need more in depth back story rather than just as plain as his father just seeking power. That will be bland and boring. What I want to see is that why he chose power and left his children alone, and what was his reason to Abandon his children. Not some old bullā¦. Like he is messed up in head or born evil or loss of emotions. Just some paragraphs of explaining his emotions in upcoming story like he didnāt love mc and his bro as much as he loved hesta firstborn or some meaningful story please š donāt spoil it by ājust born evilā cliches author
What I meant was we currently have branching storylines here like story with his mom, dad, sister. Then finding vessel for his bro, then is territory ancient ruin then untamed jungle itself, then the empire, then his curses, now his fluctuating emotions. Finishing those side stories in between can create āfeel goodā effect for us on this ride(novel) I was hoping for that š
The thing is he hasnāt even explored untamed jungle and the ancient ruins, now second territory with another set of unknowns!. Well the story is getting broad by each chapters like nest super human alliance and now second territory The story should pick up the pace even more faster now or it will become boring author!!, due to small chapters and the amount of coins we spend that couldnāt satisfy our curiosity of this story development
This has a good plot but author is petty enough to make long worded names of some items and status view repeat too much to fill the words count and too much duplicate chapters (feels like a scam to me as some people just buy chapter in bulk if they like a story and some chapters donāt even have decent story but only status view) so instead of consistency this author is trying something else ā¦ā¦. God bless u for ur future endeavours author