Lorraine_writes

The beginning has been maintained perfectly but I would truly suggest you to maintain the mystery and keep it unexpected. I will continue reading and add it to my library for now . Great work

I like the name , it's a cute name

The beginning was perfect , it started off with mystery . I hope the rest of the story has such mystery too .

I was just waiting for the new chapter , can't wait to finish it.

They dont know she's kidnapped....I see .

Woah ! So is she gonna be powerful ???

It seems to me like, you really have good ideas in your mind . When are you uploading the next chapter? I'd really love to know what happens next . Do you have any twists coming up ?

So do they get a happy ending or not ?

I loved the book , can't wait for the upcoming chapters . Keep up the good work and hoping you'll continue the book . The plot seems to be good as well , a powerful MC