Krishnikaa

Story was well written and would have been happy if Beth and Enzo story has been included...

Last chapter is not sitting well with the storyline because in the story Matthew and Serenity never seemed to be in a romantic relationship... their love seems platonic for me as a reader so the last chapter kinda ruined the storyline... also there was never any proper explanation given to serenity about the Rose tattoo.. it would have made a good plot in the end..everything was nice but the ending chapters are a bit hurried and disconnecting they don't have a flow in the storyline...

Dear Author please don't leave this story with open ending leaving their ending to readers's imagination.. this is your story and only you guys can give it a perfect ending whether Alicia went back or Harold came to her timeline is the ending you decide so please give them a closure or another beginning with another ending...dotn leave them hanging in two different worlds waiting for you to give them their happy ending...

Well written story