ArchmageOfTerror

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Just started writing a novel myself let's see if it is good or not

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ArchmageOfTerror7 months ago
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Totally bland world building and character uniqueness, adding that to cringe narrative and weak ass MC even though he got so many abilities, which he can't even use them in battle. MC's character in one line: "Talks a lot for someone who can't pull his weight". this novel is just wasted potential and of idea, the author is better off doing some other work than this Garbage.
How To Survive A Calamity
Fantasy · Peas_and_Carrots
ArchmageOfTerror7 months ago
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Loid Kage
The face staring back wasn't mine. The jaw was sharper, the hair slicked back and dark, the expression stoic and cold.
Thousand Eons of World
Fantasy · ArchmageOfTerror
ArchmageOfTerror7 months ago
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Edward Anderson
taunted a blond-haired man named Edward Anderson, heir to one of the wealthiest companies in the land. He had a baby-smooth complexion and green eyes to match his short blond hair, likely due to his privileged genes. However, he was infamous for his nasty habit of belittling and bullying others with his minions. He was a sly and manipulative young master, so one had to be cautious around him.
Thousand Eons of World
Fantasy · ArchmageOfTerror
ArchmageOfTerror7 months ago
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Katherine Raven
There was a young woman on the campus who caught everyone's attention with her stunning beauty. She had short, silky, shiny crimson hair and dark red eyes. Her appearance led some people to speculate that she might be from a lineage of vampires, but there was no concrete evidence to support this. Just one word from her mouth was enough to leave everyone breathless.
Thousand Eons of World
Fantasy · ArchmageOfTerror
ArchmageOfTerror7 months ago
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Vale
Vale was a pretty well built guy with pretty brown hair with brownish eyes. He was also taller than most guys, if you saw him for the first time you would feel like he's a delinquent
Thousand Eons of World
Fantasy · ArchmageOfTerror
ArchmageOfTerror7 months ago
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Erica Midwinter
The sound of his name being called echoed through the cold evening air, pulling his gaze away from his thoughts. Erica, a childhood friend with warm brown hair and eyes that held oceans of compassion, approached him with genuine concern etched across her face.
Thousand Eons of World
Fantasy · ArchmageOfTerror
ArchmageOfTerror7 months ago
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Grey Silverstein
A soft swoosh of the chilly wind intertwined with a weary sigh as Grey Silverstein, a young man in his twenties, stood outside the Nexus Academy. His eyes, a striking blue reminiscent of the clearest skies, scanned the horizon as his breath condensed into a misty cloud in the frigid air.
Thousand Eons of World
Fantasy · ArchmageOfTerror
ArchmageOfTerror3 years ago
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Epitome of Imagination(Restarted Elsewhere)
Fantasy · ArchmageOfTerror
ArchmageOfTerror3 years ago
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The Guide
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Epitome of Imagination(Restarted Elsewhere)
Fantasy · ArchmageOfTerror
ArchmageOfTerror3 years ago
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The Seer
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Epitome of Imagination(Restarted Elsewhere)
Fantasy · ArchmageOfTerror

Thousand Eons of World

This story unfolds from cherished memories of the past, future, and the present. Laced with eerie fright to the depths of hell, Crumbling with fear to the tears in shadows, Betwixt Evil and Good, Gods and Demons. Are your souls must be faced with such destiny... As those who shall write their own destiny with their own hands. So join me... Into this precarious journey through various worlds and imaginaries. You shall see and decide for yourself What should be done in the 'future'. This is just a part of the beginning... Of your future and 'Ours' —Yours, Erica All Rights Reserved

ArchmageOfTerror · Fantasy

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Epitome of Imagination(Restarted Elsewhere)

ArchmageOfTerror · Fantasy

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