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kHalz7dCommentedI wonder who's managing Michael's security now. If I remembered correctly his security team was provided/arranged by Carter. We're these guys replaced? Did he secretly create a new team? It could have been explained in a chapter or two. It felt rushed or something a miss.
"Oh no no no," Michael quickly dismissed her assumption. "I don't trust independent contractors, which is why I did my own digging. I had him under surveillance the entire time. I knew he would eventually show his true colors."- kHalz30dCommented
Military to have more side story action.
It was his thought, he did expect that the private aircraft would be expensive, but not that kind of expensive. He had other enterprises he'd want to enter, such as military, communications, and computers, all of which required a lot of funding. - kHalz1mthCommented
he could have just evacuated earlier. he's smart so he can come up with an excuse for leaving early.
Pain flared, sharp, and bright, but Michael's focus remained unbroken. He touched his shoulder, his fingers coming away with blood, confirming the graze. His breathing was heavy, adrenaline coursing through his veins, but he was alive—his calculations had saved him, if only just. - kHalz1mthPosted
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Micheal should establish his own Executive protection team (VIP security). Not just hire event security. He should have his trusted security aides man. He's now by this time rich and famous. He should personally know his security team.
"No, it's best that I stay here and do what I need to do. Do you have full confidence in the security firm you - kHalz1mthCommented
It's about time to include Michael's security. he's already rich and famous. time to gather an elite executive protection team.
Dr. Villanueva chuckled in response, appreciating the attempt at humor in the midst of such groundbreaking work. "I'll take your word for it then," he replied, still smiling. "But seriously, it's revolutionary what you're doing here. But I'm concerned about your safety." - kHalz1mthCommentedCh 94 The Prelude to Surprise
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Where did he park his truck? Haha
It was ten o'clock in the evening. Michael entered his house, the familiar warmth and coziness enveloping him as he closed the door behind him. Glancing around the living room, he noticed that his mother had not yet returned home. - kHalz1yrCommented
so why not use all the elements and finish the battle immediately? no one is around so he can use it without considering the secret. for quite some time now, all Grey used mainly for battle were the four elements. how about the fusion orb with all the elements, how strong will it be?
If he were to use all his elements, as well as the other things he had in his arsenal, he was almost certain that the old man wouldn't last more than five minutes against him. - kHalz1yrCommented
the greatest piece of clothing - shorts. haha it doesn't break even when a character buffed the physique. 😂
The old man's body suddenly buffed up, and the loose clothing he was wearing started to tear up. He was left with only his shorts. - kHalz1yrCommented
So it was Gaya's dream. Interesting ..
"We had a son in my dreams…something happened…we lost," she talked in broken sentences, - kHalz1yrCommented
obviously this is the future they saw and can change depending on what will happen from the present. nice plot. good to show this in this part of the story. good job.
"He still hasn't gotten over Nightmare's death. If you inform him that Aria is dead, he will lose it. We have to give him strength, not weaknesses," - kHalz1yrCommented
this is gonna be good ..
"Peyton, when you thought you were playing me, you forgot something really important," Peyton's mind went black as she walked backward in fear, - kHalz1yrCommented
ahaha.. what a twist.. didn't see that coming...🤟
"A netherel," Tanulia could recognize an undead or a netherel as they were commonly known in the cultivation continents when she saw one.