Really interesting story. I like the build up a lot. The author really developed the characters right how he imagined. I'm very impressed. Waiting for more. Keep it up!

The novel is on to a great start. I really like the weak to strong concept. The description of the world could use some more effort and work. The character is a steal. I am impressed truly. Keep up the good work. But in my personal opinion the development is a bit on the slower side. Can be a different preference for other people though.