I don't fully understand your question, but here's how I can answer it. Luck is doing the first thing that comes to his mind and that is selling food, and as time goes by he will realize what he can do by traveling between two worlds.

Dude, are you serious? Thank you so much for your nice comment and for liking my book. I'm still writing the book, you can wait for the next chapters.

I'll fix the typos tomorrow. Thank you for your feedback. What is your general opinion about the story?

Noted. 💪🏽

What do you think about the story?

Spelling errors have been corrected. Thanks for your precious comment!

Don't think in today's market. Market prices with stories are higher.

Do you have any suggestions, which word would be more appropriate? English is not my first language, so I can make mistakes.

Thank you. Please let me know if you find any other typos:) You can also write your general opinion about the story, thanks again.

Judging by your name, you love romance...I hope I don't lose you as a reader.

No, the main character may get into a relationship in the future, but the story will not deal much with romance.

Hello, the author is here! I am waiting for comments and criticisms from all of you on my first writing experience. Have a pleasant reading.