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OSAYH11yrCommentedI think you meant sly fox here rather then lazy
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So this is an early review which I will likely delete and replace once this reaches 10 chapters. Likes: - The world, I really enjoyed the graveyard act idea - I can see some scope with the midterms so that's cool - The character's masks are very unique which I like - MC is pretty unique, not explicitly soft or edgy, which I like. Dislikes - This is less of a dislike and more of a neutral but the writing can be all around the place at least like it was in the second chapter. - Not many chapters, (of course this came out like a few days ago) - Chapter titles are pretty redundant Chapter 1: Graveyard Act: Part 1 You should remove the colon it's unneeded and just becomes clutter.
- OSAYH11yrCommented
This honestly has potential, just needs commitment and popularity. Along with updated formatting, however, the formatting is what I'd expect from a newbie to the site, so all in all solid first chapter. PS: I don't think this really classifies as an academy even though it's set with a student MC.
Ch 1 Graveyard Act: Part 1 - OSAYH11yrCommented
et tu brute?
Unfortunately, he was betrayed in his old age. In the year 1198 of the Fifth Epoch, he was assassinated by the combined forces of the Church of the Eternal Blazing Sun, the former Intis royal family—the Sauron family—and other aristocrats. He eventually died in the White Maple Palace. - OSAYH11yrReplied to Dumb_Idiot_4246
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"This is the difference between earning three to four thousand yuan and earning fourteen to fifteen thousand yuan a month…" Zhou Mingrui mumbled to himself.