Ziko_Abara
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Ziko_Abara5dReplied to GrandMasterDoomBro it literally is and he’s barely a chuunin, bro wouldn’t even know how he died
Fujin sat down in a meditative posture in his living room. He cleared his mind and began planning. He thought, 'The academy is finally over. Though I had to graduate 2 years early, it ain't much of an issue. The only major event that will happen anytime soon is the Uchiha massacre. But right now I am not really strong enough to even think about interfering in it. While I do have 2 years, at best, I'll only be a chuunin officially by then.'- Ziko_Abara5dReplied to KN01NOS
You like death so much
Fujin sat down in a meditative posture in his living room. He cleared his mind and began planning. He thought, 'The academy is finally over. Though I had to graduate 2 years early, it ain't much of an issue. The only major event that will happen anytime soon is the Uchiha massacre. But right now I am not really strong enough to even think about interfering in it. While I do have 2 years, at best, I'll only be a chuunin officially by then.' - Ziko_Abara5dReplied to Banana_Legoland
People like you make it all the harder for innovation to excel. “If it’s not from the expected sources then it’s a joke”
To satisfy his curiosity, he searched for that scroll and started reading it. After reading he analyzed, 'Interesting. The scroll proposes a theory that chakra could be used to counterbalance ourselves against the gravity itself. By applying as much force as Gravity applies on us, one could float, and ascend or descend by applying higher and lower forces respectively. - Ziko_Abara17dReplied to Tusharhp45
Why cant it be both😂
"Give me three days," Michael promised to himself. After all, if he's planning on starting a business, having his own vehicle would be convenient to travel from one location to another. - Ziko_Abara17dReplied to Shivam_Thakur_1883
They redo it again in first year college though
"We are on the L Hospital rule topic," Catherine shared. "Our professor in that subject was speaking too fast and I'm embarrassed to ask questions during the class and I don't have the courage to meet him in the faculty." - Ziko_Abara17dReplied to Kroxius
Vitamins and nutrients? In ORS? na mate. water and salts of various compositions that’s ORS
He then proceeded to eat his meal, comprising only hard bread and a plain soup crafted from water and salt. - Ziko_Abara19dCommented
What kind of edgy statement is that? What kid even talks like that
"I wonder how the face of this boy changes when he understands the truth of this dark world and comes to know the secrets held within." - Ziko_Abara23dReplied to MTSOKE
It’s not cool it lacks tact and ruins immersion.
"Daemons are guardians that form within our bodies based on our ambitions, personalities, and more. They come in various forms, shapes, and sizes and are awakened at the age of 16," Mrs. Tina replied. - Ziko_Abara23dReplied to theking_901
Agreed.
Mrs. Tina resumed speaking, suppressing the urge to laugh at the antics of the four. "This world is called Alvard, a place where people cultivate their Daemons to unimaginable levels, evolving them to improve and strengthen themselves." She let her words sink in, successfully capturing the attention of her students. - Ziko_Abara24dCommented
Sasageyo Sasageyo!!!
"Okay. I'm done. Like… Is it too late to retire from the Scouts?" - Ziko_Abara25dReplied to Bro_is_bored
Potential as it’s name implies ultimately is just potential. Just a larger glass to fill when you aren’t certain you’d be able to fill it
"A library with every written record in all of History." - Ziko_Abara25dReplied to SwagnosticDaoist
How poetically profound just by your answer alone this novel just became a whole lot more interesting
[If you could wish for anything right now, What would it be?] - Ziko_Abara26dCommented
Fabio🤭🤧😂😂. My arsenal stunted wonderkid
"I'm Fabio Viera by the way," the black-haired guy said as he received the pass and juggled it for a few seconds before sending it back at Jason, all while making sure the ball did not touch the ground. - Ziko_Abara26dCommented
Omo naija ways lezz goo. sabi author nice one👍
"Oya oya, you don catch me," Daphne's English switched to Pidgin English as she replied with her hands in the air as if she had been caught. - Ziko_Abara1mthCommented
That ain’t soup man that’s ORS😂😂
He then proceeded to eat his meal, comprising only hard bread and a plain soup crafted from water and salt. - Ziko_Abara1mthPosted
The human interaction is just a bit too forced and unrealistic, the author tries to push a forgiving naruto-esque kind of MC which is calm but it’s too rushed and it interrupts the immersion. I mean i threaten to kill you and insult the one family member you ever had and you forgive me in a jiffy? Not saying the MC has to be vengeful but at least make it realistic, drag it out a bit, hint at it initially and carefully build up to it rather than lazily skip to that point all of a sudden. We’re all humans and it makes no sense cause even the best of people would find it difficult to forgive that easily. Storyline seems good and your writing isn’t bad either but the MC keeps ruining the immersion. Good luck on your story mate✌🏾
- Ziko_Abara1mthReplied to ReaperScythes
No darksouls
His attention was on the cavern entrance that was illuminated by Soul torches. As long as the surrounding environment was not dried of its soul particles, the torches would never extinguish. - Ziko_Abara1mthCommented
The Sun shines of mine though, pretty hard to hide when it’s poking out of your trousers😪
I hit him right in between his legs, where the sun didn't shine. - Ziko_Abara1mthReplied to Kyle_Cochrane_3690
It is
"Well, after you offed yourself, those men who had been about to torture you played around with your dying body. Very sexually, like, stuff went inside all the holes. Including the one you slit across your neck." - Ziko_Abara1mthReplied to Abyss_Edge
Until you need carbon paper to wipe after you take a shit
"Yeah, no, I'll pass on that. Reincarnate me in a world of Magic...but not one with, like, a medieval level of technology, I want a world more advanced, with at least an okay level of technological progress. Yeah, that sounds ideal, a world of Magic or superpowers, but with a decent level of technology," I surmised, after thinking about it for a bit.