Antonio_Colson
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Antonio_Colson1yrReplied to Antonio_ColsonShould not*
"I am not yet drunk yet." Peter said.- Antonio_Colson1yrCommented
One of those yets shouldn’ be there, though it doesnt matter which one
"I am not yet drunk yet." Peter said. - Antonio_Colson1yrCommented
I think its supposed to be “why haven’t you invited him”
"Why have you invited him!?" Elijah snapped. What if some other family snatches him first? - Antonio_Colson1yrReplied to Antonio_Colson
I really should have looked at my comments grammar before posting it
A middle-aged man with sideburns pulled him back, "lets in and see first. Don't cause trouble." - Antonio_Colson1yrReplied to
This paragraph is confusing*
A middle-aged man with sideburns pulled him back, "lets in and see first. Don't cause trouble." - Antonio_Colson1yrCommented
This Paragra is confusingph
A middle-aged man with sideburns pulled him back, "lets in and see first. Don't cause trouble." - Antonio_Colson1yrCommented
“Had done him” shoud be “had shown hiM”
Without a doubt, Raizel had kicked him out for his childish actions. His master had done him that one should be responsible for his actions. Since he made the bed, he should have prepared to lie on it. - Antonio_Colson1yrCommented
“He might as take” -> “He might as well take”
Wren collected himself, raising up both of his hands and rushed towards Chris. He might as take the first blow. - Antonio_Colson1yrReplied to Char_Charming
I had to re-read it five times to realise that wasn’t what it said.
"Master..." a little chipmunk ran over to him with a pine nut in its mouth. "Master, did you defeat that big baddy Phoenix," - Antonio_Colson1yrReplied to Gold_Member69
Das creepy
Axel was puzzled, he had never heard of such a technique before but his brain was struggling to stay focused as Kevin was still in his underwear sitting on top of him, his legs on either side of his waist, and he was massaging his pecs. - Antonio_Colson1yrCommented
The pentagram is often a pagan/wiccan symbol of faith depicting the five elements.
Even in his home world the pentagram symbol was used to represent the magic. - Antonio_Colson1yrReplied to Antonio_Colson
the* Sun* I cant belive i misspelled two things and didnt notice
Axel was an orphan and when he was eighteen he had entered the Sun Sect. After that he had worked hard without a rest and unexpectedly, when he was twenty he had shapeshifted into a wolf for the first time. - Antonio_Colson1yrCommented
Is everyone in tge sUn sect an orphan
Axel was an orphan and when he was eighteen he had entered the Sun Sect. After that he had worked hard without a rest and unexpectedly, when he was twenty he had shapeshifted into a wolf for the first time. - Antonio_Colson1yrReplied to CuteMe109339
And doesn’t*
" But....what if he woke up and didn't see us, wouldn't he be sad and cry?" Rehan heard his supposed mother say with sadness and worries laced in her melodious voice. - Antonio_Colson1yrCommented
After one night
"No, it's not like that." Lu Yizhou held his head in exasperation. "My bed is hard. Young Master's back will hurt if you lay there for the whole night." - Antonio_Colson1yrCommented
He did what
[666: Yes, 666 will not be wrong about this! He's Ren Zexi, the son of Ren Zexian and Huang Yahui. According to the plot, if you don't appear, then Ren Zexi would be adopted by his uncle and his father's restaurant would also land into his hands. Ren Zexi would be severely abused and starved so badly that he got malnourished. On one occasion, that bastard uncle even poured boiling hot water on him, creating many huge heinous burn marks all over his body! Look at this handsome and cute face! How can anyone dare to hurt him?! Are they still human?!] - Antonio_Colson1yrCommented"You descended in front of me...just like a God. From then on, you became the center of my whole world."
- Antonio_Colson1yrCommented"Eden, will you marry me?"