I haven't read it yet but it's good to see some write in Hindi to be true on this platform. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✌️

its overall good yet . So i hope you will keep writing and working on it. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✌️💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

It's good story. I hope you will go with smaller paragraphs to read. There is hope of improvement. so please keep going. ✌️👍👍 Best of luck .