The_critcal_thinka

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The_critcal_thinka2 years ago
Replied to U_dnt_kno_me
Why so mean, bro?
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Fantasy · JujumasterX
The_critcal_thinka2 years ago
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I enjoyed the first two chapters especially chapter two😂😂😂. The author went unhinged in chapter two. The writing is okay and the story flows smoothly. The only issue is just a few grammatical errors in the writing. Over all, the novel is good.
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Fantasy · JujumasterX
The_critcal_thinka2 years ago
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Hello
Ch 2 Taking revenge on bullies
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Fantasy · JujumasterX
The_critcal_thinka2 years ago
Replied to Daoist26pcQJ
exactly
He proceeded to rip off the first ally's genitals. The shock and pain from the attack killed the ally on the spot. Wasting no time, Niklas quickly moved to the third ally and performed the previous attack on him. The third ally fell to the ground, writhing and shrieking in pain as he profusely bled his way to the afterlife.
Legacy: I gained power! (discontinued)
Fantasy · JujumasterX
The_critcal_thinka2 years ago
Replied to Daoist_art_eternal
on point
"Yes, I have molested your mother on three occasions. I break into the house when you are away, and I do my stuff. From your reaction, I know that she doesn't tell about it so that her lanky twig wouldn't cry."
Legacy: I gained power! (discontinued)
Fantasy · JujumasterX
The_critcal_thinka2 years ago
Replied to Daoist_art_eternal
😂😂😂😂😂
"What in the world! Leave my pee-pee alone! Let go of me, pervert!" the first ally cried, desperately struggling to break free of Niklas' grip.
Legacy: I gained power! (discontinued)
Fantasy · JujumasterX
The_critcal_thinka2 years ago
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author went unhinged in this chapter😂😂😂
"What in the world! Leave my pee-pee alone! Let go of me, pervert!" the first ally cried, desperately struggling to break free of Niklas' grip.
Legacy: I gained power! (discontinued)
Fantasy · JujumasterX
The_critcal_thinka2 years ago
Commented
Hello
Ch 1 Niklas Vox
Legacy: I gained power! (discontinued)
Fantasy · JujumasterX
The_critcal_thinka2 years ago
Commented
the emperor is mean. Another cool chapter ending
Ch 3 The Emperor of Camelot (part three)
dropped novel umpteenth time
Fantasy · Jujumaster
The_critcal_thinka2 years ago
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nice
Ch 2 The Emperor of Camelot (part two)
dropped novel umpteenth time
Fantasy · Jujumaster