My favourite chapter is the third one!!!

I like the way your described Harvard University. The way you put showed Ashley as being a hard worker, devoted but stressed out 😰 is amazing being it shows that Harvard is really hard. But the thing is it would be really sad to see Ashley become a Harvard drop-out if she is graduating 👩‍🎓 in six months. Overall I really like how you introduced Ashley and I Like her personality and how studious and stressed she is because I can see how passionate she is in her education.

It was really well written and it makes a good plot to start off your story. I like the cliff hangers in the chapter as well. Keep up the great work!

Oh I meant Julia not Julie 💀

The third chapter is very well written. I personally think that it sounds better than the second chapter. The way you describe the emotions of Ash and Julie were AMAZING 🤩. This chapter makes me curious 🤨 about Ash and Julie’s past relationship and how these characters will show development through their internship together. I honestly have gotten hooked on to the storyline and can’t wait what happens next… Happy Writing! ✍️