supreme_venerable

What's wrong with the author and using thousands of words to say a whole lot of nothing, cause this chapter could be 1-2 paragraphs without the useless filler

Will his attitude stay the same or wil he mature a bit 🤔

This story is interesting, and i see that the author has fixed his pacing and the audience reactions cause we just had a fight that was 2 chapters long and trial went on without getting the audience reactions for every word. Keep it up .

Bro, I get what you are trying to say, but this duel has been going on for 16 chapters, and only now has his clothes been damaged, and if not for you explaining the skills we already know of like its showing up for the first time , and giving us useless dialogs like Sylva and the spirit only need 1 paragraph to show that she can talk to them and their personality and the audience reactions are all a different way of saying they were surprised, now if you remove the useless parts i mentioned the 16 chapters would have fit about 5 chapters, and if you still want to over explain then you should do the impossible and release 5 chapters a day, otherwise people will start see that this story is not moving forward they'll leave to stock up chapters and will eventually forget about it or read their stocked up chapters elsewhere 😉. I also dont understand your fixation on high word count cause due to your over explaining problem, it makes your readers pay more coins and fp for close to no story progression. I may sound harsh, but I like this novel, and i dont want it to turn into a dead novel like "Follow the Path of dao from Infancy," which started out hot like yours and got boring. 👍

I've never seen a MC so sorry and OP at the same time

Troll 🧌

Dude simping hard for the villain

i can't do this anymore. This went from fun to the author trying to drag out everything 🙄 with useless dialogs

He feels like a dumb MC that waits for someone to die, then regrets and then gets revenge

thanks for understanding