Patijado

106 Fahrenheit my dude. 106 Celsius you can't get better from

This story is very well written, and a compelling story line, and original to boot. The MC just rubs me the wrong way, unfortunately, so I can't enjoy it as much as I'd like to.

Pulling inspiration from a few things makes the story recognizable in parts, but in a very good way. In other parts, we see new and unfamiliar things. The writing is also phenomenal.

I wanted to rate this higher, but the amount of repeating the previous chapter, especially using fast passes or coins to unlock and just being the repeat of the samechapter3 times, I had to lower the scores. The story is good, but it's obviously translated, and the repeating, bring it way down.

are you kidding me? repeated and waiting a fast pass again? is there a way to report a scam author?

this is the same chapter. what a waste of a fast pass!

This is a very fun way to start a book. I love it.

When do we get new chapters?

Part of me thinks, "when will he cultivate in the real world?" Then I remember, he needs to be in the lotus position which he can't do.

As a polyamorous man, I love this. This is exactly what it is like with people new to it. 🤣🤣🤣