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King_of_Ace10mthCommentedAnd for me after deleting and editing last two chapters..its the one I really enjoy much without any re-reading and giving stress on my head...love the flow of the chapter..and the scene between Yohan and Diana is really intense... I hate to admit it, but they had a chemistry tho...Aamn...author..I could smell your intention where are you going🙃
Ch 24 A Tension Filled Tease- King_of_Ace10mthCommented
Quite a good introductionary of a Charcter..
And that was the night Catherine and her partner Lance, through their men, finally found the legendary traitor of the 'Underworld', 'The Ghost Whisperer'. - King_of_Ace10mthCommented
Used for disposing of corpses...why??Someone there to eat them!?
A masked stranger, carrying a thin, tethered paper, stepped into the isolated, dead town located near the sea, which was left abandoned by its people after a catastrophic hurricane. Since there was no intention of reviving the town and no one considered it habitable, it was taken as one of the 'Event' destinations that come under the jurisdictions of the Underworld and was used to carry out important assassinations and to dispose of corpses. - King_of_Ace11mthCommented
Why it's still there
The ever-lasting awkward silence between them grew intense, as they kept staring at each other. - King_of_Ace11mthCommented
Oh..here it is...
"I am aware of the stories, Mister Yohan. But sorry, I actually don't work under Mister Lance but his partner. Heard a lot about you from her." - King_of_Ace11mthCommented
Oh..here
Fresh off from surviving an assassination attempt by the 'Underworld', Ramika Ray joined as a new student in the Achievers' Academy in the city, Oasis. Though being reminded of the brutal torture she endured when she was kept as a captive before her miraculous escape, her days were actually going fine and peacefully. But the 'Underworld' was actually tracking her whereabouts and after torturing an illegal passport seller, the head of 'Damage Control', Diana Jones finally finds out about her whereabouts. - King_of_Ace11mthCommented
Ramika???
This paragraph has been deleted. - King_of_Ace11mthCommentedBut he felt even worse when the human he looked down started to walk towards him. His wolf screamed and cried pathetically resulting in Joshua feeling his knees getting weak and dropping down to the floor, panting.
- King_of_Ace11mthCommentedYohan listened to it with no emotions and simply tossed the chocolate into his mouth, while Edward continued.
- King_of_Ace11mthReplied to Moonwriting
Me too
Bleeding all over his face, Yohan, an eleven-year-old boy, stood with his chin down, not even bothering to wipe off the dripping blood. Upon first glance itself, Edward noticed a weirdly mysterious aura around the human kid, intriguing him. - King_of_Ace11mthCommented
Quite a time tho..
[ROUGHLY AROUND TWELVE YEARS EARLIER]-- - King_of_Ace11mthReplied to Mi_22
Yes..it is..snd it should be..so she doesn't use anyone.. especially Yohan..
"Hmm... We'll see how the great Uncrowned King is going to defend himself. Against the wrath of the organization he left behind...." - King_of_Ace11mthCommented
The failure you are...at least he bit better than you..
"Hmm... We'll see how the great Uncrowned King is going to defend himself. Against the wrath of the organization he left behind...." - King_of_Ace1yrCommentedEyes twitched from the short-tempered Yohan who scratched his scalp, lamenting and cursing the creator of the question paper.
- King_of_Ace1yrCommented"Fuck Off! Hundred more people are standing behind you! Move your ass!"
- King_of_Ace1yrReplied to ZoeTinnah
- King_of_Ace1yrPosted
Okay..so the author just read the two chapters but I found the storyline quite interesting... the world background and the little fellow like Neath......added beautifully in the story. Although it had its problems ...but I found the writing style quite interesting I want to author write to more of more this chapters so get to know beautifully he/she write.. ( I hope don't like me since I found this book from some authors profile while searching for free books)
- King_of_Ace1yrCommented
Let's goooooo
"Mission on our place Neath, let's go," I said to Neath kicking my baby blanket off - King_of_Ace1yrCommented
Oh woha...thats intesting
They have no idea that I can see and talk with ghosts.