Xaphan

Eventually won’t other insects come over and start eating the corpses then he can just eat the insects

She could totally be the justice card too because justice needs to be unbias and watch before acting

That’ like 6 years of saving up not accounting for the raises every year

Is the drawback you can’ sleep?

Ice affinity maybe too?

Listen Ya'll, I'm none the less shameless as the other authors I would rate this novel a 5 star but imma be honest. This is the first thing I've ever written I'm still trying to figure things out I know I'll have like some spelling or punctuation mistakes buts that's ok for now I wish I could explain the thoughts and pictures in my head into words and you'd think that it's easy but its way not. stability of updates I should at least give out a chapter a day at the very least I just don't know yet it's pretty early I don't know the troubles I face when writing so we'll see for the future. from what I can tell already its going kind of fast my brain is working over drive trying to come up with the next step and I'm not putting into account all the other things that I can add or take away so it's a more well-rounded story. I really enjoy my character design so far since the Mc is a blind man, I'm trying to use his other senses to the max. To his perspective I'm trying to use the sound of things and the smell of things a lot just so people know his perspective on things. other characters are still in the works. The world background right now I haven't even thought of so I'm going to be neutral with it but I do have at least some idea and I think it's going to be decent without spoiling too much. thank you for reading my novel I would apricate kind words and feedback even negative. open book here and would love to find many other ways to make my story even better.