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TH18113mthCommentedI thought she would end up looking like this with a name like mei mei.
Mei Mei's avatar had a unique appearance. She possessed a beautiful face, long flowing black hair that cascaded down her back, and was adorned in a Victorian-style maid uniform. Despite its appearance, it was a divine-class gear, modified slightly for ease of movement, although it didn't matter much because Mei Mei seemed to glide effortlessly everywhere she went.- TH18113mthReplied to Uncanny7
You’re thinking logically, fanfics are usually a bit lacking in logic to make it more entertaining.
"A fusion of Thragg and Battle Beast with the power of transformation of Baek Yoonho from Solo Leveling. That should be strong no matter where it goes?" - TH18113mthReplied to Onxio
Isn’t pink kryptonite the one that makes him gay?
While it was doing so, it also tracked the locations of each of the Leagues members, notting that Batman was now safely within the medical centre, accompanied by both Superwoman and Wonderwoman. - TH18113mthCommented
I’m getting mixed signals, one minute he’s remorseful for what happened to jasmine/morgana and now he’s admitting to essentially creating Voldemort and wanting to commit cultural genocide, is it just me or has this kinda confused anyone else?
It was when he first saw Tom Riddle in an orphanage that he saw his potential to be this threat. So, he molded him slowly into becoming the darkest wizard in centuries and after Tom's defeat at Albus' hand, he would have become the true leader of the magical world. Unfortunately, the Potter incident occurred before Tom could start his conquest on an international level and so he would bide his time until his return. - TH18113mthCommentedPushing myself off from the wall, I head to the Cranel residence and prepare to say goodbye. Thinking about something, I glanced down at the thigh holster on my right leg and on impulse checked the gun in it. Pulling out a Colt Python Revolver loaded with .45 HPAP rounds, I checked the modified cylinder, gotta admit making a thirty-two round cylinder was an amusing idea but effective, before putting it back in place. Holstering it, I passed by the various villagers of the place I've called home for a while. Stepping through the front door of the Cranel home, I shut it behind me. Zeus is in his favorite chair and looks up from his book at me.
- TH18113mthCommentedAfter getting put in this world, I had really been born into my setting for myself. I had done countless things before the Gods descended, and I was frozen in time. Running a hand through my sweaty brown hair, my tired hazel eyes lock onto Bell Cranel. Grandson of Zeus and the village's favorite rabbit as he runs about excitedly. Watching him run on home, I adjusted the Hk417 rifle strap on my right shoulder. Looking around, I lean against a house and check my status after a long time.
- TH18114mthReplied to BurgerNight
Wouldn’t is the shortened way of saying would not
"You know, if you kept it in your pants, half of your problems would not exist, and maybe the Greek mythology books would be so large and give me a headache when I memorized them." - TH18114mthCommented
They’re 5 years old. Why are you writing this?
The girl, upon seeing this, blushed as if she had been tickled, her entire face turning red as she tried to cover her face with her hands. - TH18114mthPosted
This was a cool idea for a cyberpunk fic, it’s well written with little to no grammar issues I noticed, but I couldn’t read past the fifth chapter as I wasn’t interested in the mc. By that I mean his introduction felt like “This is the MC… anyway blah blah blah” and because of this there was no build up, no person to picture if that makes sense. When they were retrieving the woman from the Blackwall I actually forgot who the MC was for a moment. Al in all I feel like if you went back and fixed this this fic would grow in leaps and bounds.
- TH18111yrCommented
Shouldn’t it be “Errol Belladonna can move things which his mind” and not the way you wrote it or am I wrong?
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During this arc why do the writers feel the need to just force a cringy threatening scene I just don’t see the point.
"Gato and his men are weaklings. I spied on him and his men last night, they're all weak compared to us. We are shinobis, ninjas, we are properly trained. Gato is nothing but an insect to us." - TH18111yrPosted
- TH18111yrReplied to Aaron_Chong_6689
And only a 6/10? My friend you have very high standards.
I nodded to myself, satisfied with my overall growth over the last couple weeks. My physique changing considerable because of the weighted training, now I was heavier due to my height, bones and my muscle density, the perfect trifecta for being a tank I presume. Though I now had gained the body type akin to that of Garous. My race synchronization rate reaching 100% as well. This brought about changes in my looks, my hair was as white as snow now, with its glow being more apparent, with my eyes now a crimson red with a slight glow as well. Although a bit much for my liking, I was now 6/10 in the looks department. I earned it. - TH18111yrCommented
How does a skull grin?
As the settles down, Wilhelm returns to view with his right hand holding his burning handgun, with the other hand gripping the hilt of his knife, now transformed into a whip sword. With a sinister grin, Wilhelm violently pulls Calida to him and punches her gut, sends her soaring to the dock. With one great leap, he lands and stomps on the girl, before spinning his sword and throwing her to the sky.