I think the developing of the story is not too over wheeling, and not too boring. All the good novels i read had a somewhat slow start, but they gradually speed up when they successfully catch the attention of the reader.

I usually don't write any reviews nor comments, but I'm interested in the plot and the idea of the world in general, Sci-fi is actually the best genre i like to read, but not many people really know how to show the futuristic idea of technology with a scientific basis. I like the story so for and i advice any one who starts reading to at least reach chapter 30, i think the real plot started there. Good job, thumbs up, and i would like to see some mysteries in the future in this story, so please add some.