Jaxx has my temper and Mavis is quiet like you, I love their dynamic. I'm glad we don't fight like them but they're probably my favorite couple, them and then Emma and Seth from Storm Brewing are my favorite couples out of books because they remind me of us.

I love Jaxx and Mavis, they are so cute together. Since I've read the full story now (almost) on Wattpad I just love it so much. I think you need to do a sequel :P Also I know who the characters are based on / remind you of so the story is always going to be one of my favorites. Never give up on your dreams babe. You're an excellent writer, you're only going to keep getting better the more you write!

:D Seth really loves Emma (Emma loves him too) they are just young and stubborn! Like me and my girlfriend. I make her crazy with my stubbornness! Seth is more scared than Emma though I believe.

The sad thing was that when her "parents" pass away later, she felt like she had tried too hard to push them away. The story about the monkey-bars was actually a story my grandma told me happened to her when she was about Emma's age!

Thank you! I figured I'd put some middle-school humor in there, but Emma has a temper! Her character is inspired by my girlfriend Emory! She is like Emma, very relaxed and calm until you push her too far! The "ADHD" stuff was put in because I have ADHD and Autism and so does Emory's sister Wolf :D Hope you liked an inside look at the story (you're the first person I've explained it to!)

Thank you very much! Yes, the POV does change quickly, almost flips you into reality but I am glad I was able to hold your attention through it, I can always work on the details if you have any suggestions! Thank you so much for your support!

I liked the story quite a bit, For your first work in English you did well. I had a bit of trouble following the story at times but most of the time it was very interesting. I like your concept of "Hell." We have a similar style of writing in some ways. I write about some controversial topics too sometimes. Right now I am writing about a myth too for the WSA. I saw your post on the forums for Review for Review so I thought I'd check your story out anyways! Also, feel free to check out mine, it's on my page. I will keep up to date with your work! Well done!

You'll just have to see what happens in the next chapter ;) Thank you for your support my love!

I figured you would lol. You're such a softie. I'm glad you liked it <3

Thank you! I appreciate it :D I do try, although I have a lot I have to work on. I love your writing too! Also, I think I was going to save the description of the scene for later in the book so my readers can see his motives and the kind of destruction those creatures leave behind. :D Thanks again for your support!

Thank you so much! You are awesome! More is coming very soon, can't wait for this next chapter, it's going to be heart-wrenching!

Thank you my friend! Added chapter 3! Working on chapter 4 right now!

Thank you! I want to make very relatable characters, I think that is one of my main motivations. I want to make Emma a very strong female lead because of all the stuff with Women's Rights going on in the US right now. I want her to be strong, independent, and I want her to succeed and be likable. Hopefully this will inspire young girls to be themselves, and to think for themselves. Thank you for your support :)

Thanks babe! I am about to write some more on it soon but I am so glad you loved it baby. You are always so supportive and you are the one who got me back into writing in the first place so thank you!

Thank you Jas! I am very happy that you liked it so much that means a lot to me!! You are awesome :D I will be updating it regularly so make sure you have it saved! Let me know if you have any suggestions as well :D

Awh, thank you a lot! Coming from you that means the world baby <3

Thank you babe you're amazing I'm glad you love it! :D

You are really awesome!! Thank's Igor! Yes, it is a real legend about a real mythological character and it is definitely related to her! I will be updating the story as much as I can every day or other day if possible until I finish it. I've done quite a bit of research to write this book so I hope everyone likes it when I am finished!