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bruh why 2-party? you have seen its flaws in us
this chapter was confusing for a guy who has not watched 'chuck'
the same thing over and over again in different words is a feature of chatgpt. you yourself can try it out...
oh right this would be awesome
hey author, i have a suggestion. please remove phrases like ' feeling the weight of his words.' this would make the novel less ai like and improve the flow of the sentences and plus the phrase itself is redudant
bruh i feel like author writes story while he's high...
The main issue with this book is that, bro likes to yap a lot... 2-3(ch.87 to ch.89) chapters are routinely used as info dump. infact the info dump is thru monologues of mc. it would be one thing for a character to explain to another thing which would info dump for us. but here mc monologues and that's the info dump.
yup telling after the fight was a much better option
i think a chapter was skipped.