Kurojin

Thanks for the chapter 👍

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I completely agree with your decision because it will help the story line to be stable and not tangled instead, you should write more romcoms, the story will be better

Excellent....................................................................................................................................................

Good story, has high potential and hope to develop more in the future ........,...........................................................................👍

Basically, how to build a good story, not too complicated, suitable for those who want to read for entertainment. But if it's about expertise, each person will have a different assessment. Good, there is potential for further development, so I hope the author improves more

I think you should develop MC relationships with female or male main characters instead of fighting scenes if doing so would make the story pacing better than fighting that doesn't make any sense at all (personal opinion)