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This is one of the best Naruto Fanfics I've ever read. It is just so amazing and ingenious. I can't wait for when Naruto is older and more powerful. But I have a question do you think you could have him use more jutsu in his fights. I really want him to use jutsu like the First and Second Hokage and Madara. And do you think you could have him use his chains and monstrous strength more often. I really want to see him use his monstrous strength fully and how powerful it would be. And I want him to use the chains more often because they're so useful and versatile. Also because he doesn't have them in a lot of fics. And one last question can you give him the Strength of a Hundred seal/ Yin seal. I think it would be cool and it would give him another edge over other people. And i can totally see Tsunade making him do it so he's safer and more protected from injuries. And it will cement that he is a medical ninja and her heir in that. That he has mastered her strengths. Just like in the original Sakura did. I also can't wait for him to start using his other bloodline limits and for him to come out as Tsunade and Minato's son. and I'm excited to see what other summons he's going to get. And how you're going to have him learn sage mode. Like are you going to have him learn Mokuton sage mode. Slug sage mode or a completely different original sage mode. From one of the other summons or something else. I just can't wait to see what you do next. So please update soon and have a good day.

I love this so much. The system is awesome and how you wrote Night is just ingenious. I love how you changed some of the plot and are letting Night get powerful abilities. I also love the relationship between Night and Tsunade. I hope Night gets a summons. Maybe even a unique one to him like Wolves, Dragons, Tigers, Foxes or Lions. I also hope he learns Sage Mode either through one of the Three Great Sage lands or through Mokuton. So please keep updating because this is one of the best Naruto Fanfics I've ever read.

This is amazing. One of the best Pokemon fics I've ever read. I can't wait to read what happens next. Like him meeting his family and learning more about them. Him growing up and what pokemon he'll have. I hope you don't just give him 6 pokemon. He has to have at least a couple teams worth of pokemon. At least 18 pokemon which is 3 teams worth of pokemon. But I wouldn't mind him having more. You could also let him have a team per region. or a Team per type like Dragon, Fire, Ice etc. Especially since he is going to be a Pokemon Master. He has to have the pokemon to become one. Also I think it would go with his character to have a lot of pokemon. Because he always wanted a lot of family and friends and that is what pokemon are. Anyway that is all I wanted to say. So have a good day and update soon. And maybe answer my comment if you have time.

This story is really good. I love how you've not made it a harem story. But it would be nice if there was a system. Just to show his stats. Because it's hard to know how strong he is if you can't compare him to someone. I have a question in the beginning. Where it says he has dozens of times his mother's chakra reserves. Does that mean he has Kage level reserves. And if so how does he compare to Kakashi and Naruto. Does he have 100 times Kakashi's reserves. Does he have more or less than Naruto. it would be amazing if you could answer this. Anyway have a good day and update soon please.

How big will Sunfyre be when the dance of the dragons starts. He's already bigger than he would of been then. And he'll only keep getting bigger over time. And with how fast and how much he is growing. He should be Monstrous by the dance. So if you could give me an idea like bigger than Vermithor but smaller than Vhagar or bigger than both of them. If you could it would be amazing and very appreciated. So please answer me question please.

These are the Pokemon he should catch on his journey. Delphox, Greninja, Talonflame, Vivillon, Florges, Pangoro, Male and Female Meowstic, Aegislash, Malamar, Tyrantrum, Aurorus, Goodra, Trevenant, Noivern, Avalugg, Incineroar, Primarina, Victreebell, Annihilape, Nidoking, Beedrill, Alolan Ninetales, Galarian Rapidash, Aerodactyl,Typhlosion, Feraligator, Aggron, Mawile, Flygon, Altaria, Luxray, Frosmoth, Abomasnow, Serperior, Haxorus, Toxapex, Salazzle, Kommo-o, Dragapult, Urshifu, Duraludon, Baxcalibur, Audino, Zeraora, Kabutops, Drapion, Male Pyroar, Armarouge and Ceruledge. If you could give him these pokemon I would be very happy and thankful. And i think they are amazing Pokemon and would go well with his journey and the story. But that's all I wanted to say so have a good night and I hope you think about it.

This is really good. I love that you're giving him all the good pokemon. I hope he competes in all the leagues and becomes a pokemon master. Also I hope all his pokemon keep leveling up. So at the end of the story all of his pokemon are level 100. I think that would be amazing. Especially seeing all his team members and partners reach their full potential. I would love to see Pikachu, Arcanine and Dragonite reach it first though. They were the original three they need to reach it first. Also I don't think they should stop at level 70-80 they should all reach level 100. So have a good day and night and update soon.

I really love this story but the translation in half the chapters is pretty bad and barely readable. I love the idea and it's really good It just needs to be re-edited. The pokemon names, moves and some other things are the worst part. Even the chapter titles are and the main characters name. I really like this story and I want to read it i just physically can't its not legible in some chapters. And Especially since I got some early Patreon chapters and it's was still the same iInever would of spent my money if I knew. But still the idea is good and I know it could be amazing it just needs to be cleaned up a bit. So I'm sorry if this is a bit mean but I thought it best to be honest. Because I really want to reread and continue this book. Especially if you clean it up so please do.

I really like this I just restarted it and it's just as good as I remember. I only got a portion of the way through the first time but I'm hoping to read it all now. I hope he gets all the good pokemon. Since he has a system and could care for them. It would also make the story amazing. Especially if he's going to participate in all the leagues. He should get most of the starters and dragon types. All the pseudo legendaries. And for some ideas Arcanine, Gardevoir, Gallade, Lucario, Aerodactyl,Absol, Luxray, Mawile, Milotic, Shiny Gyarados, the Eevelutions, Dusknoir, Lapras, Gengar, Alakazam,Togekiss, Houndoom, Skarmony, Steelix, Ampharos, Electivire, Pidgeot, Both Ninetales, ahnillape, Victreebell and all the other amazing ones I didn't name. Have a good night and I hope you update soon.

I really like this story. The writing quality is amazing and the plot is pretty unique. I have a request that I think would go well with this story. Do you think after the Marvel universe you could do Jujutsu Kaisen. I think it would be really cool to see how Haruto would do and gain in the JJK world. But it's just an idea you don't have to do it. I just thought it would be cool and would go with your story. And I would love to see the interactions of the Narutoverse and JJK world. Especially Haruto and Gojo I think it would be hilarious. But anyways have a good day and update soon.