it's a god damn harem fiction. what more did you expect. Guys who write harem fanfic are cringe and weird, and should stop writing all together.

GLORIOUS DEATH, BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GODS, SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE.

Your criticism Is to support the author, but you keep calling the character a him even though the character is a she. At this point the Author should just ignore you seeing as how you can't even get that right.

Good beginning so far. I'll be closely monitoring.

meh not really something I'm gonna enjoy. good luck

dudes tweaking so hard right from all that weed he smoked.

I don't know why you're using levels of technology when you can use the Kardashev scale, because it is a lot easier to understand and doesn't have too many levels where things get confusing