All I have to say is this is an amazing story If you aren’t reading then you should. You shouldn’t miss out. A big shout out to the author ride on

In my opinion it’s a good book though there’s room for improvement. The writing quality is good and I urge the author to keep it up. Work on your characters and world background. In my opinion you (The author) has writing potential. I just believe you need time and more experience. Hope you keep writing I’ll love to see how this ends