SUNLESSSSS

author I'mma be honest here, there are a shit ton off loopholes in your story the story has potential with all the mysteries that's left to uncover, but other than that there isn't much to brag about 1) the name of the sword balerion belonged to chunma, where everything related to him including his martial arts is of Asian origin, but there no resemblance of it, balerion is no Asian name, the martial arts isn't properly described like what's the idea of his martial arts, how many techniques are there,and what's the story behind every technique and how does fray master them, if you could describe them all then the story generates more pull, in the long term there will be very few people to read this if you can't work on this 2) him going from e rank to c rank has no depth at all, it's as if he breezed through it and the power systems aren't mentioned well enough 3) add more pov for other characters as well to build more development, for now none has any and I as a reader have no attachment to any other than fray, and please work on the naming as well, there is no originality in it, why use footballers name for no reason well there are a lot more but this is what came to mind and ik you want fray to return back to his world but I hope he doesn't becomes a villain who slaughter everyone in his sight but rather those who shows him malice that's all

the cliffhanger is way too much, please post two more

is there gonna be another chapter?

I'mma be honest bro, but I have seen this same story twice, and this is the third time I have seen this novel on webnovel

do you plan to make him a ruthless villain

I thought there would be 4 chapters?

is there more chapters coming now?

author, what will be the dynamics of the relationship between fray and series, will it be enemies or will they have a negative relationship?

is fray with balerion on par with snow full power or is he weaker?

I am curious, is current fray with balerion on par with full power snow or is he much weaker than him?